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Re: City girl
Thank you for all the feedback! And yeah, I'm guilty when it comes to the sentence thing. I can't even hide behind an excuse of not knowing I do it, ...
Oct 16, 2007 -
Re: City girl
I leaned my head against the window of the passenger seat hard, as if aching for it to fall away so I could collide with the pavement that was moving ...
Oct 15, 2007 -
Re: Hey
I sweat Mark Twain like no other, and Shakespeare is hands down the greatest thing I've ever read.
Oct 15, 2007 -
Re: Hey
Having someone perform something I wrote would be truly extraordinary. I'm an actress, myself, so I can't decide what would be more fun: acting it out or writing it down. ...
Oct 15, 2007 -
Re: Hey
Haha, thank you for the welcome! I'm a little all over the place when I write, I'll admit. I love writing poetry but I'll confess that I'm no good. I ...
Oct 15, 2007 -
Re: Definite
He's a very definite person; even in his uncertainty, he is matter of fact. Defined. Settled. Distinct. He never gets mixed up with himself; I am forever tangled. He says ...
Oct 15, 2007 -
Re: More than emotion but less than a life
The title, in my opinion, says the most here. It really is well put. I like the, for the most part, subtle rhyming. Lengthening the stanzas with a bit more ...
Oct 15, 2007 -
Re: Slavery
For the most part it's really nice, but I feel like you should have more to it. Because it's so short, and like you said, a little cliche, adding on ...
Oct 15, 2007 -
Re: Hey
Yuppp...I'm new... I got this account a long time ago but only really got around to doing anything with it right now. So yeah...any questions?
Oct 15, 2007 -
Re: I don't know how to say this...but I'm kind of a big deal
I'm Margaret Dru, but you can just type 'MD' because I know my name is a pain in the ass to type out completely everytime. Born and raised in Chicago. ...
Sep 7, 2007
